This week Mrs Clark gave a picture and writing about it and like it. because we have to do descriptive language and here is mine one
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interested to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Verbs
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Adverbs
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misty
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Black
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hallway
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destroyed
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Ghostly
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seat
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Room
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Rusty
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Narrow
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stairs
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Hospital
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Old
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horrible
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haunted
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light
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Ghost
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My story
One misty night i saw a old Hospital. I went in the old Hospital and saw a seat with light on it. I sat on the seat and it broke on me. I saw some stairs i ran up them they were squeaky. I saw a rusty room i went in the room rusty and i saw a bed i sat on the bed. something grabbed me and drage me back onto another seat, with chains and keep me here it was a ghost…
Self Assessment
I think I have done well but need to more descriptive writing.
Per Assessment
I like how you use the adjectives adverb and verb in the right sentence.
