WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interested to our readers

 This week  Mrs Clark gave a picture and writing about it and like it. because  we have to do descriptive language and here is mine one

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interested  to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
misty	Black	hallway	destroyed
Ghostly	seat	Room	Rusty
Narrow	stairs	Hospital	Old
horrible	haunted	light	Ghost

                       My story

One misty night i saw a old Hospital. I went in the old Hospital and saw a seat with light on it. I sat on the seat  and it broke on me. I saw some stairs i ran up them they were squeaky. I saw a rusty room i went in the room rusty and i saw a bed i sat on the bed.  something grabbed me and drage me back  onto another seat, with chains and keep me here it was a ghost…

Self Assessment

I think I have done well but need to more  descriptive writing.

Per Assessment

I like how you use the adjectives adverb and verb in the right sentence.

descriptive writing

This week Miss Clark give a photo we have to descriptive writing about the photos have my descriptive writing. I learnt how to descriptive writing about photos and boat too. I need to add more information

WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
Broken	Beach	Crashing	loudly
Black Clouts	war

My Paragraph

One Cloudy day (witch was today) a war happened .A Boat crashed it was burnt and broken and it was disturbing and loud.it was on the beach to and sharks awake and attack boat. Fire happening and explosion. The next day two boat was on the beach it looked broken and crash to. I think i will see it tomorrow the end.