Kia Ora, Hazel My name is Jacob I am from Totara 3 I like how descriptive you are with your sentences. I think that you could add a full stop at the end of you sentences. See you soon.
KIA ORA Jacob its me Hazel. Thank you for all the positive feed back on my writing. OPPs I cant believe I forgot the full stop thanks for pointing that out.your sincerely Hazel.
Kia ora Hazel Katelin Here. Wow That egg is really cool did you fond it? I like how you have added some descriptive word In your piece of information Maybe next time you could write a bit more WELL DONE.
KIA ORA Katelin Hazel.Yeah that egg is really cool but no it turns out that this is Mrs Prenagasts egg. I am not sure if she found it or not perhaps you could ask her.Thank you for all the positive feedback.And yes I am just really silly and forgot a full stop.Your sincerely Hazel.
Kia Ora, Hazel My name is Jacob I am from Totara 3 I like how descriptive you are with your sentences. I think that you could add a full stop at the end of you sentences. See you soon.
ReplyDeleteKIA ORA Jacob its me Hazel. Thank you for all the positive feed back on my writing. OPPs I cant believe I forgot the full stop thanks for pointing that out.your sincerely Hazel.
DeleteKia ora Hazel Katelin Here. Wow That egg is really cool did you fond it? I like how you have added some descriptive word In your piece of information Maybe next time you could write a bit more WELL DONE.
ReplyDeleteKIA ORA Katelin Hazel.Yeah that egg is really cool but no it turns out that this is Mrs Prenagasts egg. I am not sure if she found it or not perhaps you could ask her.Thank you for all the positive feedback.And yes I am just really silly and forgot a full stop.Your sincerely Hazel.
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