Whistling wind tickles and makes me shiver
Leaves of Red,Gold and Brown
Falling,swirling,drifting down
Like confetti at a party
The days grow cold,
Frosty and wet,
Winter is around the corner
But it's not here yet!
Crunchy grass, Frozen toes
But snow will fall
And freeze it all!
This is my poem by Hazel hope you enjoy.
Hi Hazel
ReplyDeleteFantastic descriptive words used in your poem. Well done.
I love the autumn leaves of many colours. Has to be one of my favourite seasons. Which would yours be?
Tineka
Kia ora Hazel, This is a beautiful description of Autumn. You have described the falling leaves perfectly. I am pleased that you used rhyming in a effective way because it can be tempting to put in words just for rhyme rather than meaning. I am glad Greymouth does not get heavy frosts or snow!
ReplyDeleteHi Hazel, it's Abby here from Westland High School, this is such a great poem with amazing rhyming word and how you described autumn in great. I wish I could write this good! Keep up the great work!!
ReplyDeleteCheers Abby,
Hi I really love your poem I hope u blog more poem keep up the good
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