Kia Ora, Hazel I like how you have added a image of the Nikau palm for your next learning step you could make this post a bit more descriptive Bye bye now
Hello There, Hazel I'm Caitlyn from Totara 3. I really like the Nikau Palm, looks tall to me. Do you like Nikau Palms? They are alright. Maybe next time you could add a bit more to your descriptive writing so we know a bit more about it! Thanks for Sharing Hazel. Well Done, From Caitlyn Totara 3. Bye.....
Kia ora Hayzel,Kaede here. I really like your Nikau palm sentence. Maybe next time you could add more detail to make it more interesting. Other than that good job.
Kia ora Hayzel It is Pyper here from your class T1. Good job! I really likehow you have a picture to show. I also like have you have what kind on tree it is. Maybe next time you could add more description to your sentence. Is the Nikau palm tree your favourite? Graet job, See you next time, Pyper
This week we were learning descriptive language, here is my sentence:
Kia Ora, Hazel I like how you have added a image of the Nikau palm for your next learning step you could make this post a bit more descriptive
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Hello There, Hazel I'm Caitlyn from Totara 3. I really like the Nikau Palm, looks tall to me. Do you like Nikau Palms? They are alright. Maybe next time you could add a bit more to your descriptive writing so we know a bit more about it! Thanks for Sharing Hazel. Well Done, From Caitlyn Totara 3. Bye.....
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hayzel,Kaede here. I really like your Nikau palm sentence. Maybe next time you could add more detail to make it more interesting. Other than that good job.
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ReplyDeleteIt is Pyper here from your class T1.
Good job! I really likehow you have a picture to show. I also like have you have what kind on tree it is.
Maybe next time you could add more description to your sentence.
Is the Nikau palm tree your favourite?
Graet job,
See you next time, Pyper