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Favourite Fast Food
In maths this week we are learning to create bar graphs online. Here are the results for our favourite fast foods.
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Friday, 24 August 2018
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interested to our readers
This week Mrs Clark gave a picture and writing about it and like it. because we have to do descriptive language and here is mine one
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interested to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Verbs
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Adverbs
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misty
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Black
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hallway
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destroyed
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Ghostly
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seat
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Room
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Rusty
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Narrow
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stairs
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Hospital
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Old
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horrible
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haunted
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light
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Ghost
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My story
One misty night i saw a old Hospital. I went in the old Hospital and saw a seat with light on it. I sat on the seat and it broke on me. I saw some stairs i ran up them they were squeaky. I saw a rusty room i went in the room rusty and i saw a bed i sat on the bed. something grabbed me and drage me back onto another seat, with chains and keep me here it was a ghost…
Self Assessment
I think I have done well but need to more descriptive writing.
Per Assessment
I like how you use the adjectives adverb and verb in the right sentence.
Friday, 17 August 2018
descriptive writing
This week Miss Clark give a photo we have to descriptive writing about the photos have my descriptive writing. I learnt how to descriptive writing about photos and boat too. I need to add more information
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
My Paragraph
One Cloudy day (witch was today) a war happened .A Boat crashed it was burnt and broken and it was disturbing and loud.it was on the beach to and sharks awake and attack boat. Fire happening and explosion. The next day two boat was on the beach it looked broken and crash to. I think i will see it tomorrow the end.
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Verbs
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Adverbs
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Broken
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Beach
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Crashing
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loudly
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Black Clouts
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war
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My Paragraph
One Cloudy day (witch was today) a war happened .A Boat crashed it was burnt and broken and it was disturbing and loud.it was on the beach to and sharks awake and attack boat. Fire happening and explosion. The next day two boat was on the beach it looked broken and crash to. I think i will see it tomorrow the end.
Thursday, 28 June 2018
Descriptive language
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